Hello again Augustine, it's Billy here from the Summer Learning Journey. I am really enjoying reading all of your posts. This one stood out for me.
I love the language you've used, particularly 'sight of heaven'. What a great way to end your poem.
'Terrific for travellers' is a good use of alliteration as well, repeating that 't' sound.
Writing acrostic poems is a lot of fun. I was trying to write one for 'new year' but I think I might need a little help. Would you be able to fill in some of the gaps?
Hello again Augustine, it's Billy here from the Summer Learning Journey. I am really enjoying reading all of your posts. This one stood out for me.
ReplyDeleteI love the language you've used, particularly 'sight of heaven'. What a great way to end your poem.
'Terrific for travellers' is a good use of alliteration as well, repeating that 't' sound.
Writing acrostic poems is a lot of fun. I was trying to write one for 'new year' but I think I might need a little help. Would you be able to fill in some of the gaps?
N
E excitement
W
Y
E
A adventure
R resolution
Thank you, I really appreciate your help.
Billy.
Hey Billy
ReplyDeleteThanks for commenting. I can help you with your acrostic peom.
N - New Year
E - Excitement
W - WOW and
Y - YEPEE for the new number
E - Extravaganza
A - Adventure and
R - Resolution
I hope you like my words for your acrostic poem. I had fun looking for words that relate to new year.
thank you
Augustine