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Thursday 3 January 2019

The southern lights - by Augustine


 L - Lit up the sky
 I - Incredible view

 G - Great horizon
 H - Happy destination
 T - Terrific for travellers
 S - Sight of heaven

2 comments:

  1. Hello again Augustine, it's Billy here from the Summer Learning Journey. I am really enjoying reading all of your posts. This one stood out for me.

    I love the language you've used, particularly 'sight of heaven'. What a great way to end your poem.

    'Terrific for travellers' is a good use of alliteration as well, repeating that 't' sound.

    Writing acrostic poems is a lot of fun. I was trying to write one for 'new year' but I think I might need a little help. Would you be able to fill in some of the gaps?

    N
    E excitement
    W

    Y
    E
    A adventure
    R resolution

    Thank you, I really appreciate your help.
    Billy.

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  2. Hey Billy

    Thanks for commenting. I can help you with your acrostic peom.

    N - New Year
    E - Excitement
    W - WOW and
    Y - YEPEE for the new number
    E - Extravaganza
    A - Adventure and
    R - Resolution

    I hope you like my words for your acrostic poem. I had fun looking for words that relate to new year.

    thank you
    Augustine

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