Practising how to write an Explanation writing
W.A.L.T: Use the correct structure for the purpose of writing on Explanation.
Why is having electricity in our house important?
Electricity plays in an important role in keeping our homes warm, lights lit, and technology powered making our life easy.
Electricity is very Important in our homes because it runs our T.v and Games. We use the television to watch the news to see if any new updates are happening around the globe. Watching t.v also educates people, by watching the news, sports or the cooking shows. We also use the t.v to play our games - x box, PS4. Playing Games and watching t.v entertains people. This makes our life easy.
One of the reasons why electricity is important because it powers our lights in our houses. We use lights to see in the dark. Without lights at night you can't see a thing, and you might injure yourself and it will hurt badly. Thats why we need lights in our houses to make sure that we are safe and can see in the dark.
Another reason why we need electricity is because it keeps our food warm/cold. Electricity turns our oven and refrigerator on, without electricity our milks will become warm and our cooked food would remain raw. That is why electricity is important because it keeps our food fresh or cooked and healthy to eat.
Electricity is also important to us because it keeps our homes warm or cool. Like for example, if you have a heat pump when we come home and it is hot you can come in feeling the cool air. When it is cold, you can do inside feeling the warm air because the electricity powers the heat pump. Electricity powers our heat pumps to keep our our homes nice and cool or warm and toasty. This makes our lives more comfortable.
There are so many other reasons why electricity helps us in our homes, like it helps us wash our clothes, runs our hot water and more. Without electricity we would have to make fire to warm ourselves and use lamps or candles for lights. We also have to wait for a newspaper to arrive to give you news from around the globe That is why we as people need to use electricity in our homes to make our lives very easy.
Hey August,
ReplyDeleteYour explanation was very descriptive and sophisticated. Writing is one of my weakest subjects... Electricity does indeed help us in a lot of ways. Though personally, I think we shouldn't rely on electricity too much. What do you think? Keep up the good work :)
Roneeza